I will do your critique in 3 Parts since there are 3 different compositions. The first composition where the symbol is the most prominent element is done very nicely. It is clear that the viewer is meant to look at the symbol first instead if the text or surrounding elements since you made the symbol the largest text size. It was a smart decision top place the body of text in between the symbol, as I believe this makes it easier for the person viewing this composition to read and interpret what the symbol means. I enjoy the simplicity of this composition and I don't believe there is anything I would do to change it.
For the second composition where text is supposed to be emphasized, I think you did a very good job at making it large enough where the reader can easily understand and interpret it. The typeface works vey well with the design and it has a playful sense with all the different patterns of the symbol repeats over and over again.
For the third composition which I am assuming to be the one where heading is the most prominent subject in the composition I believe it is done very well. I am unsure what the giant S looking symbol is but it is a very smart design and goes well with the rest of the composition. Everything is clear and legible and overall a very well thought out piece.
All three of your designs are very well done! Good Job!
Hi Macayla,
ReplyDeleteI will do your critique in 3 Parts since there are 3 different compositions. The first composition where the symbol is the most prominent element is done very nicely. It is clear that the viewer is meant to look at the symbol first instead if the text or surrounding elements since you made the symbol the largest text size. It was a smart decision top place the body of text in between the symbol, as I believe this makes it easier for the person viewing this composition to read and interpret what the symbol means. I enjoy the simplicity of this composition and I don't believe there is anything I would do to change it.
For the second composition where text is supposed to be emphasized, I think you did a very good job at making it large enough where the reader can easily understand and interpret it. The typeface works vey well with the design and it has a playful sense with all the different patterns of the symbol repeats over and over again.
For the third composition which I am assuming to be the one where heading is the most prominent subject in the composition I believe it is done very well. I am unsure what the giant S looking symbol is but it is a very smart design and goes well with the rest of the composition. Everything is clear and legible and overall a very well thought out piece.
All three of your designs are very well done! Good Job!
-Nathaniel Bittner